Score: 10

"you can come through anything..."

submission: The Survivor [Orch.]

date: October 24, 2009

and it helps to have a friend.
Wandering the streets, the survivor looks pleadingly at the white dots in the blue-black sky-is anyone up there caring? He turns his eyes back to the ground, littered with rubble. As he walks on, he looks at the now broken places he and his friends once congregated, the remains of the restaurant his family used to eat at when he was a child, the park where he'd had his first real date. The bench where he'd kissed her was half-crushed by who knows what.
He turns his head away. The grief is too much.
Walking on, he comes to the remnants of a hospital, once the most respected place to have your life saved. It was full the night the city fell. The irony does not escape him. A piece of rubble falls-a lonely sound.
The first rays of light begin to illuminate the sky.
Another piece of debris tumbles to the ground. A small voice curses the stones on top of it. The survivor runs to help, tears away the rubble with desperate hands. A girl-woman really, but young-soon emerges from the pile of shattered hospital. Dust-covered and shaken, her hands clench and unclench a small white nurse's cap as she turns to survey the damage done.
The sun crests the horizon.
"I guess the first thing to do is to find the other survivors." Her voice is strong.
"I've already found one."
"You have, haven't you?" She smiles. "Forever in your debt, by the way. Now come on, friend. There's work to do."
There is yet hope.

(yeah, i'm long-winded.)

Score: 10

"Oh Em Gee it's words:"

submission: Eternity (Orch. Ver.)

date: September 18, 2009

That's amazingly good. I'm really just enchanted-this song brings to mind so many possible scenes--it's this happy background to anything really, but it makes me think especially of epics and middle-ages England and that sort of thing.

As far as the music goes technically, it's really great background (like I said before) for singing, like what you'd expect for some English folk tune. If you were to make this as a "single" (by which I mean a stand-alone sort of piece), I would think that you'd want to smooth out some of the choppiness in parts (like around 1.45 with the cello I think it is or the bells around 2.00). As a pianist, the only way I can describe it would be "use the damper pedal". So not legato exactly, but not quite as cut off.

I really liked the shape of the piece, most of all the expansion at 1.16.

This song is glorious.

Score: 10

"whoa!!"

submission: Stormy Day (or night, i dunno)

date: October 25, 2008

MAN!!! That's just EXCELLENT!!! You are definitely my favorite right now... :)

Maybe I'm imagining things here, but I thought I heard a little Metroid Prime influence around 0:40 and onward... that's cool, though, so please don't be insulted if I'm wrong!

Kind of a Doors-y feel to this, too, now that I think about it...
5/5, 10/10
Great work!!

Score: 9

"Must hear more!!!"

submission: Scars Of Time Cover (Sample)

date: September 8, 2008

Finish it oh please oh please!!

Maybe instead of guitar you could find a similar-sounding substitute....just an idea.

Score: 8

"That's nice!"

submission: Vigilanties (More added on)

date: September 8, 2008

It's very subtle after it switches tone, but it can seem a little too soft at times (but maybe that's my volume on the computer)

Why is it called "vigilantes"? Just wondering.

Score: 10

"Whee!!!"

submission: -GreenGreens remix-

date: June 3, 2008

That song is an endorphin machine for me...I'm all smiles!! ^_^

Great remix, too! Skilfully done!

Keep it up!!

Score: 10

"wow is that good."

submission: -clocktower-

date: June 3, 2008

That's just neat. Industrial, futuristic, dark, and very sinister.

Seems vaugely like Radiohead's "Climbing up the Walls" to me in some parts, particularly around 2:40.

You're a new favorite artist of mine.

Score: 10

"oh wow"

submission: Abstraction (Demo)

date: January 16, 2008

That's just too pretty to be real. I swear, either you're magical or I'm hallucinating such a beautiful song.

Score: 9

"*dazed*"

submission: Smearing the Universe all Over

date: January 14, 2008

If I'd known who you were at the time, I'd have considered this a great holiday gift.

You're really good!

Score: 8

"Neat!"

submission: Metallic Clouds

date: January 14, 2008

That's just totally cool.
:)

Definitely like it!